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Strawberry is very cute. I wanted to give her a hug while reading her backstory. I got the ending that I wanted to see (easy decision to make). Getting just the one ending makes the VN very short for me, but I don't really need any other endings haha.

I like it so far. Not a ton of length to judge on, but... Characters are very cute, especially Hephaestus. I like the art. Music is decent. I'd say check it out if you're looking for some trans/LGBTQIA+ comedy in your visual novel reading.

Very minor... gripes? annoyances? I don't know - what's a lesser version of those words?

Has the voice acting style where lines will often be spoken as just a few words. And it's more generic than what's written and so the same voice lines can be reused. Not a huge fan of this style, but not a big enough problem to make me disinterested.

In general, Alice in Wonderland references don't really do anything for me, but so far it's not so heavily "inspired" as to bother me. So many stories and games have gone VERY heavy on referencing it over the years so I guess I'd say I'm a little tired of it, but it's easy enough to overlook here.

Looking forward to the full version and finding out what happened to get the main character in this jam, and obviously where they go (particularly w/ Hephaestus, of course).

Just got a game over. Got back to the main menu. Pressed down, but the game sometimes takes a few seconds on a screen change before it recognizes inputs (Why though? I have a good computer). But more importantly, I accidentally selected New Game as a result. It IMMEDIATELY autosaved, overwriting my previous autosave. This was before I even selected the difficulty. Could the game not autosave right off the bat? I don't understand the point of it. Kind of frustrating.